Baldwin and Tapanga

More RP Characters. The female is 's. The char's name is Tapanga. The other one... the male on the edge of the cliff is my char, Baldwin. They have a rather odd relationship. It started with them yelling at one another.
In this particulat scene, Baldwin has just ran away from his abusive father to a cliff that he likes to sit on when he wants to be alone. Tapanga comes to him and comforts him. It was all very cute.
I know that Tapanga turned out like shit... that's not how I wanted her to look... but I've already sprayed it so I can't change it now. >.< Also... the landscape looks odd... It is the first time I have ever attempted a cliff face such as this. I didn't think it turned out TOO badly considering it is the first time. But, hey, if you have any suggestions I can impliment to later drawings... I'm always open to new ideas in ways to improve my style. ^_^